Further refinement of the description.

Author: mariha

README.md

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 You may want to read our [Open Letter]({% link open-letter.md %}).
 
-Women make up about half of the society, yet in free software projects, where digital infrastructure and everyday tools for all of us are made, they represent only 3% of the contributors(\*), in comparison to 7-23% in the industry [global(\*\*)-US(\*\*\*) data]. We believe, on top of other economical and social inequalities that limit women's participation in the space, it is because they are not always being treated fairly in the environment, especially when a project faces a conflict - and they leave, as a means of self-protection. Objecting the process has been observed to result in being forced out from the project.
+Women make up about half of the society, yet in free software projects, where digital infrastructure and common tools for all of us are built, they represent only 3% of the contributors\*, in comparison to 7-23% in the industry [global\*\*-US\*\*\* data]. We believe, on top of other economical and social inequalities that limit women's participation in the space, it is because they are not always being treated fairly in the environment, especially when a project faces a conflict - and they leave, as a means of self-protection; or even worse - are being forced out.
 
 Here we **[document](https://github.com/OneWomanLess/OneWomanLess.github.io/tree/main/personal-stories) the process of leaving** and **[advocate](https://github.com/OneWomanLess/OneWomanLess.github.io/tree/main/solutions) for non-discrimination and fair conflicts resolution**, acknowledging everyones inalienable rights and needs as a human being, in the digital space of free software communities.
 
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 You can help this project by:
 
 - adding your testimonial to the [Personal stories](https://github.com/OneWomanLess/OneWomanLess.github.io/tree/main/personal-stories) directory \
-(with a pull request or by sending us a file to be uploaded anonymously)
+   With a pull request or by sending us a file to be uploaded anonymously.
    - consider also adding the project(s) that made you leave to the [Wall of shame](https://github.com/OneWomanLess/OneWomanLess.github.io/tree/main/wall-of-shame) directory \
-   (an empty file named after the project would be enough, we'll make you an owner of that file)
+   An empty file named after the project would be enough, we'll make you an owner of that file.
 
 - proposing a solution in the [Solutions](https://github.com/OneWomanLess/OneWomanLess.github.io/tree/main/solutions) directory
 
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-(\*) [https://opensourcesurvey.org/2017/](https://opensourcesurvey.org/2017/) (data on demographics, conflicts, foss consumption) \
-(\*\*) [https://survey.stackoverflow.co/2017#demographics](https://survey.stackoverflow.co/2017#demographics) \
-(\*\*\*) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diversity_in_open-source_software#Diversity](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diversity_in_open-source_software#Diversity)
+\* [https://opensourcesurvey.org/2017/](https://opensourcesurvey.org/2017/) (data on demographics, conflicts, foss consumption) \
+\*\* [https://survey.stackoverflow.co/2017#demographics](https://survey.stackoverflow.co/2017#demographics) \
+\*\*\* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diversity_in_open-source_software#Diversity](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diversity_in_open-source_software#Diversity)