@@ -22,34 +22,34 @@ private static void startStory()
2222 {
2323 // wakeUp (recipe below) --#2.1
2424 // ------------- Recipe for wakeUp --#2.2
25- // Tell the user "You wake up and have a boring day. The End ." --#1
25+ // Tell the user "You wake up and have a boring day. The end ." --#1
2626 // ------------- End of wakeUp recipe --#2.3
2727 }
2828 else if ("explore" .equalsIgnoreCase (action ))
2929 {
3030 // approachOoze (recipe below) --#4.1
3131 // ------------- Recipe for approachOoze --#4.2
32- // Tell the user "You approach a glowing, green bucket of ooze, worried that you will get in trouble, you pick up the bucket." --#3
32+ // Tell the user "You approach a glowing, green bucket of ooze. Worried that you will get in trouble, you pick up the bucket." --#3
3333 // Ask the user "Do you want to pour the ooze into the 'backyard' or 'toilet'?" --#7
3434 // If they answer "toilet" --#8.1
3535 // pourIntoToilet (recipe below) --#12.1
3636 // ------------- Recipe for pourIntoToilet --#12.2
37- // Tell the user "As you pour the ooze into the toilet it backs up, gurgles and explodes covering you in radio-active waste." --#10
37+ // Tell the user "As you pour the ooze into the toilet it backs up, gurgles, and explodes, covering you in radioactive waste." --#10
3838 // Ask the user "Do you want to train to be a NINJA? 'Yes' or 'HECK YES'?" --#11
3939 // If they answer "yes" --#13.1
40- // Tell the user "Awesome Dude ! You live out the rest of your life fighting crimes and eating pizza!" --#14
40+ // Tell the user "Awesome dude ! You live out the rest of your life fighting crimes and eating pizza!" --#14
4141 // Otherwise, if they answer "heck yes" --#13.2
42- // Tell the user "Awesome Dude ! You live out the rest of your life fighting crimes and eating pizza!" --#15
42+ // Tell the user "Awesome dude ! You live out the rest of your life fighting crimes and eating pizza!" --#15
4343 // Otherwise, if they answer anything else --#13.3
4444 // endStory --#16
4545 // ------------- End of pourIntoToilet recipe --#12.3
4646 // Otherwise, if they answer "backyard" --#8.2
4747 // pourIntoBackyard (recipe below) --#19.1
4848 // ------------- Recipe for pourIntoBackyard --#19.2
4949 // Tell the user "As you walk into the backyard a net scoops you up and a giant takes you to a boiling pot of water." --#17
50- // Ask the user "As the man starts to prepare you as soup, do you... 'Scream' or 'Faint'?" --#18
50+ // Ask the user "As the man starts to prepare you as soup, do you...'Scream' or 'Faint'?" --#18
5151 // If they answer "faint" --#20.1
52- // Tell the user "You made a delicious soup! Yum! The End ." --#21
52+ // Tell the user "You made a delicious soup! Yum! The end ." --#21
5353 // Otherwise, if they answer "scream" --#20.2
5454 // startStory --#22
5555 // Otherwise, if they answer anything else --#20.3
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ else if ("explore".equalsIgnoreCase(action))
6363 {
6464 // endStory (recipe below) --#6.1
6565 // ------------- Recipe for endStory --#6.2
66- // Tell the user "You don't know how to read directions. You can't play this game. The End ." --#5
66+ // Tell the user "You don't know how to read directions. You can't play this game. The end ." --#5
6767 // ------------- End of endStory recipe --#6.3
6868 }
6969 }
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