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Introduction
How To Use The Questionnaire
- Thinking about security and privacy risks and mitigations early in a project
- is the best approach as it helps ensure the privacy of your feature at an
- architectural level and ensures the result, descriptions, protocols and
- algorithms incorporate privacy by default as opposed to through possible
- implementation mitigations.
-
- The Privacy Interest Group (PING) recommends that a feature group review the
- guidance and questionnaire when first considering their feature and meet with
- PING at that time to discuss any questions they have about how the
- guidance/questionnaire intersects with their feature at a conceptual level.
- After the feature group has developed their feature with the
- guidance/questionnaire informing their development process, the group should
- bring an early draft of their feature specification with Privacy consideration
- section to PING for review. From there the feature group should iterate on
- their design.
-
- When requesting a Technical Architecture Group review, include the filled
- questionnaire, along with the description of changes or observations made
- during the design process. This allows external reviewers understand the
+ When designing a new web feature or technology, you should think about
+ security and privacy risks and mitigations early.
+ Please have a look at this questionnaire document
+ as you consider the design of a new web fearure or technology.
+
+ When requesting a Technical Architecture Group review, please include
+ responses to this questionnaire, along with the privacy-related aspects of
+ the design. This allows external reviewers understand the
rationale, as well as the challenges and evolution of the feature, with
respect to security and privacy.
- It is understandable that developers may not always have the necessary data
- to see the broader picture and possible implications, for example in relation
- to other existing web functionalities. The answers to the questionnaire are
- meant as help and input for people who may nonetheless make security and
- privacy remarks, or the assessment.
-