Adjust language for getting patent policy comittments from non-participants#1129
Adjust language for getting patent policy comittments from non-participants#1129
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This makes sure that we seek commitments to the patent policy from the the people who are originating the substance of the change being offered, rather than from those who are doing the mechanical work of offering them. Note: This aligns with current Team practices and existing tooling. Addresses w3c#903
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Query about proposals originating from more than one party.
| When a party who is not already obligated under the Patent Policy | ||
| offers a change in class 3 or 4 | ||
| When a proposal for a change in class 3 or 4 | ||
| (as described in [[#correction-classes]]) to a technical report under this process |
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With this change, I don't think the words "under this process" add anything, so I'd suggest deleting them as part of this PR.
| offers a change in class 3 or 4 | ||
| When a proposal for a change in class 3 or 4 | ||
| (as described in [[#correction-classes]]) to a technical report under this process | ||
| originates from or contains substantive contributions by a party not already obligated under the patent Policy, |
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This gives rise to a potential edge case that some change originates from more than one party not already obligated under the patent Policy.
If I'm reading it correctly, under this scenario, the Team can satisfy this changed Process requirement by getting a commitment from only one of them, rather than all of them.
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That's not the way I read it. Do you have a rephrasing suggestion to make it clearer?
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| originates from or contains substantive contributions by a party not already obligated under the patent Policy, | ||
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> request | ||
| a recorded royalty-free patent commitment; | ||
| for a change in class 4, the Team <em class=rfc2119>must</em> secure such commitment. |
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Proposal as requested:
| originates from or contains substantive contributions by a party not already obligated under the patent Policy, | |
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> request | |
| a recorded royalty-free patent commitment; | |
| for a change in class 4, the Team <em class=rfc2119>must</em> secure such commitment. | |
| originates from or contains substantive contributions by any parties not already obligated under the patent Policy, | |
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> request | |
| a recorded royalty-free patent commitment | |
| from all of those parties; | |
| for a change in class 4, the Team <em class=rfc2119>must</em> secure such commitment. |
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I don't object to this language, but it seems to me to be using more words to mean the same thing.
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I made the proposal because I don't think it does mean the same thing!
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I think this gets closer, though I do wonder why classes 1, 2, & 3 only require a request, while class 4 requires that the request be satisfied.
| originates from or contains substantive contributions by a party not already obligated under the patent Policy, | |
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> request | |
| a recorded royalty-free patent commitment; | |
| for a change in class 4, the Team <em class=rfc2119>must</em> secure such commitment. | |
| originates from or contains substantive contributions by | |
| any parties not already obligated under the patent Policy, | |
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> request | |
| a recorded royalty-free patent commitment | |
| from each of those parties; | |
| for a change in class 4, | |
| the Team <em class=rfc2119>must</em> secure such commitments | |
| from each and every such party. |
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Now I'm in the position of thinking that change doesn't modify the meaning of my proposal! Possibly commitment on the last line should be commitments.
I did actually consider this and decided that such commitment in the last line can only be interpreted as referring to all of the requested commitments. If it doesn't read that way to you @TallTed , how would you feel about just changing the "must secure such commitment" to "must secure such commitments" in the last line?
I'm sensitive that, in increasing precision, we may be reducing readability and heading towards language that feels more "legalistic" than it needs to.
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I have no opinion about emphasising secure.
Given the comments, I would suggest going with the proposal at #1129 (comment) with secure emphasised.
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This is what this gives:
| originates from or contains substantive contributions by a party not already obligated under the patent Policy, | |
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> request | |
| a recorded royalty-free patent commitment; | |
| for a change in class 4, the Team <em class=rfc2119>must</em> secure such commitment. | |
| originates from or contains substantive contributions by any parties not already obligated under the patent Policy, | |
| the [=Team=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em> request | |
| a recorded royalty-free patent commitment | |
| from all of those parties; | |
| for a change in class 4, the Team <em class=rfc2119>must</em> <em>secure</em> such commitment. |
I'm ok with that. @TallTed, fine by you too?
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It's not clear what adding emphasis achieves here, so suggest leaving as it was.
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In my opinion the <em> on secure makes more clear the required resolution of the requests that were issued based on the previous phrase.
I won't lie down in the road on it, but I'll ask that folks keep this sequence in mind for potential future revision if such commitments are not being treated as required (until after some time without securing them).
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The Revising W3C Process CG just discussed The full IRC log of that discussion<brent> subtopic: https://github.com//pull/1129<brent> Github: https://github.com//pull/1129 <TallTed> s/florian, you wanted to make a procedural point/ <Ian> Florian: PSIG is discussing this and has not yet converged. But one note is that prior to 2019 there was no formal rule about what to do regarding non-Member contributions , and the PP FAQ explained that it's the responsibility of a WG Chair to do the right thing. In 2019 a formal rule was introduced but the PP FAQ was not updated. <Ian> q+ <Ian> Brent: My first reaction is that the PSIG should update the FAQ <brent> ack Ian <Ian> Ian: Two areas of concern for me include (1) where rules should reside [IMO, should not be in the process] and (2) who has responsibilities (e.g., Chairs v. Team) <Ian> Brent: Since PSIG is discussion, let's await their findings. <RRSAgent> I have made the request to generate https://www.w3.org/2026/01/14-w3process-minutes.html Ian |
This makes sure that we seek commitments to the patent policy from the the people who are originating the substance of the change being offered, rather than from those who are doing the mechanical work of offering them.
Note: This aligns with current Team practices and existing tooling.
Addresses #903
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